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Colin Smith

Part 1: "A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama...", paragraph 1

I think it’s funny that the bugle call used is the reveille, which is supposed to signal troops to wake up in the morning. Probably the filmmaker didn’t know that the call wouldn’t make sense at a hanging, or maybe he didn’t think the audience would be able to tell the difference, and he simply liked the reveille.

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Posted October 17, 2007  12:00 am
Part 1: "A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama...", paragraph 1, replying to Jordan Johnson

It seems that the viewer would already know the nature of the hanging by the sign displayed before the beginning credits. The bugle call may be there to reinforce the fact that the hanging is military, but the viewer should realize that it is military very soon after the call by seeing the uniforms.

Rachel, I agree that the horns are startling and kind of out of place, but that's a very effective way of letting the viewer know that this is not a hanging for peacetime criminal offenses but military reasons.

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Posted October 16, 2007  11:54 pm
Part 1: "A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama...", paragraph 1

Who is the single man who looks like he’s standing atop a rock? It looks like it could be the lieutenant or one of the sentries. Why did the director show him?

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Posted October 16, 2007  11:43 pm
Part 1: "A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama...", paragraph 2, replying to Rachel Shocket

I think that the purpose of using Farquhar’s face is mainly to give the viewer a sense of direction. Without showing Farquhar switch his gaze across the screen, for example, the viewer would be disoriented from seeing one end of the railroad, then the other end immediately afterward. There has to be some sort of transition signifying that the camera turned 180 degrees, or the sequence becomes dizzying.

In this video clip, I like how the camera shows what Farquhar is looking at. It shows this by setting the scene, then cutting back to his face to show that his eyes were viewing that sight.

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Posted October 15, 2007  12:38 pm
Part 3: "As Peyton Farquhar fell straight downward...", paragraph 18

The description of the symptoms of being hanged reminds me of the drum motif from the film that I referred to in class today. It may hint to the astute reader that Farquhar is being hanged in his real life, the way that real happenings can leak into our dreams (like a telephone ringing near a sleeping person can make him answer it in his dream, for example). However, the foreshadowing is easily disguised by the fact that Farquhar was delirious. Likewise, the drumming at the end of the film can be disguised by the fact that, by 1962, music was a common way to build up suspense in films.

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Posted October 8, 2007  8:06 pm
Part 3: "As Peyton Farquhar fell straight downward...", paragraph 17, replying to Christina Piacquadio

Very astute, Christina. I don’t know if I buy the idea, but I like it a lot. Maybe we could follow the metaphor to the fact that the walls terminate at a point, which would make them seem to go on for infinity. That also could be a comment on war. Still, I’m not sure if the author meant it (he was, after all, trying to portray a dream state), but it’s interesting.

I think the "black bodies of the trees formed a straight wall on both sides" is a metaphor for the war, in which neither side was completely just and innocent, therefore both were "black" (symbolic of lack of truth, something sinister) at some point, and both created a battle in which one had to make the difficult decision of choosing a side-one or the other, no in-betweens or maybes.

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Posted October 8, 2007  7:54 pm
Part 3: "As Peyton Farquhar fell straight downward...", paragraph 14

Oops, I meant to post that to the next paragraph.

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Posted October 8, 2007  7:45 pm
Part 3: "As Peyton Farquhar fell straight downward...", paragraph 14

This is unrelated to the story, but I think it’s interesting to point out that logging is common these days in North America because the most recent war in which a significant amount of shrapnel was produced was the Civil War. In Europe, for example, logging is uncommon and very difficult because of the danger that shrapnel in trees from WWII and WWI poses to high-speed saws.

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Posted October 8, 2007  7:44 pm
Part 3: "As Peyton Farquhar fell straight downward...", paragraph 14, replying to Rachel Shocket

An aeolian harp is a kind of instrument like windchimes, but the wind blows strings at certain harmonics, depending on the wind speed. It sounds like this: http://www.cooginstruments.com/Sounds/AeolianSoundClip.mp3

Aeolus was the Greek god of wind. Here, "Aelolian harps" acts as both auditory imagery and a mythical allusion. It also reinforces how majestic the "enchanted spot" was for Farquhar.

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Posted October 8, 2007  7:38 pm
Part 3: "As Peyton Farquhar fell straight downward...", paragraph 8, replying to Daniel Thaller

A second thought: obviously the water provided enough surface tension to bounce a cannonball out of the river! Surely the force required to deflect a cannonball is enough to misshape a volley of bullets.

No, these are without a doubt bullets. They flatten when they hit the water, because they were probably made out of lead which is a very malleable metal. Bullets would either "mushroom" or break up into fragments anyway when shot into water, regardless of the size or material of the bullet. Also, the metal was hot because it was just shot out of the barrel of a rifle. They aren't spears.

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Posted October 8, 2007  7:27 pm
Part 3: "As Peyton Farquhar fell straight downward...", paragraph 11

It doesn’t seem to be an actual turning point for the entire passage, just a reaction to a real threat. In fact, it seems Farquhar was spared by the lieutenant’s impractical order. After Fuquhar is finished worrying about the fire-at-will and the grapeshot, he practically has a straight shot home, and he does indeed make it home to his wife.

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Posted October 8, 2007  7:22 pm
Part 3: "As Peyton Farquhar fell straight downward...", paragraph 8, replying to Daniel Thaller

Definitely. Soldiers used to mold bullets out of lead over campfires, so it’s not exactly a stretch to imagine a bullet becoming very hot from air resistance. Additionally, water has a high surface tension, so it can provide a lot of force back into a material that hits it at high speed. There’s no way a spear or arrow tip could become uncomfortably warm or lodge itself between a person’s collar and neck without lacerating the neck.

No, these are without a doubt bullets. They flatten when they hit the water, because they were probably made out of lead which is a very malleable metal. Bullets would either "mushroom" or break up into fragments anyway when shot into water, regardless of the size or material of the bullet. Also, the metal was hot because it was just shot out of the barrel of a rifle. They aren't spears.

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Posted October 8, 2007  7:15 pm
Part 3: "As Peyton Farquhar fell straight downward...", paragraph 1

I really like the use of the word “ramification” to describe the pain Farquhar felt radiating from his neck. Like the word “radiate” (which means to grow like the root of a plant), “ramification” means spreading out like the branches of a tree. It evokes an image of flames branching from a source, or the pain pulsing through ramification of Fuquhar’s arteries and veins. It’s extremely visual.

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Posted October 8, 2007  6:48 pm
Part 2: "Peyton Farquhar was a well to do planter. . . .", paragraph 3, replying to Christina Piacquadio

The bridge was under control of the Union army, who had probably recently advanced to that position. Since the bridge was necessary for transport of troops, supplies, etc, a commandant of the Union has condemned anybody to be caught tampering with it. Naturally, Farquhar wanted to hurt the Union by burning the bridge, thereby impeding the Union’s progress.

I'm just a little confused about why anyone tampering with the railroad, its bridges, tunnels, or trains would be so bad as to hang the person for it...is it because the work is being done by the North and it's helping their advance?

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Posted October 8, 2007  6:40 pm
Part 2: "Peyton Farquhar was a well to do planter. . . .", paragraph 3, replying to Michael Willis

Tupelo, the birthplace of The King!

If the story is designed in a "backwards" manner, as Soham and Kaitlyn proposed earlier, then this would be the rising action - here we have the first mention of the titular Owl Creek bridge. Owl Creek is located south of Tupelo, Mississippi.

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Posted October 8, 2007  6:34 pm
Part 2: "Peyton Farquhar was a well to do planter. . . .", paragraph 3, replying to Kaitlyn DeVoe

Farquhar surely couldn’t help that the Union was advancing toward his plantation. He was a patriotic Confederate, so he tried to burn down the bridge that the Union controlled. Not really wandering around.

I find it interesting that Peyton could not detect the deceit in this man. If he truly were a Confederate, then why would he endanger himself by wandering around so close to where the Federal Army was? I seriously doubt that "posted everywhere" could reach far enough away (30 miles) to not be at risk of being seen by the Federals, because during the civil war there was no modern transportation to allow for the quick spread of word.

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Posted October 8, 2007  6:31 pm
Part 2: "Peyton Farquhar was a well to do planter. . . .", paragraph 6, replying to Zhenya Kaliberova

These kinds of tricks were commonplace in the Civil War. There are dozens of stories of officers writing up false battle plans and “accidentally” leaving them behind in the wake of enemy troops, soldiers impersonating civilians, civilians impersonating soldiers, planting of explosives, covert operations, etc. In fact, Ambrose Bierce spent a bit of time in the Union army, so he was probably exposed to a lot of these sorts of operations. I’m sure that he meant Farquhar to be the victim of a fairly routine Union “sting” operation.

The first time I read this story, I did not catch the significance of the soldier being a Federal scout. However, now this seems to be a crucial part in the story, because it is assumed that he tipped off the Yankees at Owl Creek Bridge. I am also wondering if the story of Farquhar was not unique. Maybe the scout went to other such plantations and tricked other Confederates to come to the bridge and get killed.

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Posted October 8, 2007  6:16 pm
Part 2: "Peyton Farquhar was a well to do planter. . . .", paragraph 4

This, by the way, is an example of a picket post: http://www.lib.unc.edu/ncc/pcoll/civilwar/82-312.JPG

Probably not too hard to elude if it were a half a mile from the bridge.

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Posted October 8, 2007  12:48 pm
Part 2: "Peyton Farquhar was a well to do planter. . . .", paragraph 4

The “student of hanging” phrase is definitely not meant to foreshadow. The reader is already well aware that Farquhar is going to be hanged. The phrase is probably there to serve as a bit of irony for the reader, or maybe it is a merely a coincidental byproduct of the way that Bierce was writing the dialog.

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Posted October 8, 2007  12:47 pm
Part 2: "Peyton Farquhar was a well to do planter. . . .", paragraph 4, replying to Kaitlyn DeVoe

I like Rebecca’s response, but I’d like to add that perhaps the choice of the word “student” means to say that a student would have seen or studied hangings to the extent of being particularly cautious, instead of or in addition to particularly able to elude death. Of course, Farquhar being so eager to sabotage the bridge, my meaning doesn’t apply to him.

When Farquhar says "--a civilian and student of hanging--," is this not foreshadowing to his own death? Or perhaps I am just not familiar with what a "student of hanging" might mean... I may have just shot into the dark, anybody have any ideas?

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Posted October 8, 2007  12:44 pm
Part 1: "A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama...", paragraph 5, replying to Lacy Green

I agree with your observation. I noticed the mixing of beauty with horror or dread, too. The same thing seemed to happen in a few places in the story, and I’ve seen it in other writing too. I think it adds to the surreality of a situation. After all, this man was in his home with his family only a few days ago. I’ve never seen somebody actually die before, but after hearing a lot of houpla in the news whenever somebody dies, it seems like what would truly be sickening about an execution is how mundane it really would be: the sun still rises, the grass still grows, etc, just like any other day. The author’s description of the water and the sun help to show how normal and mundane the environment is surrounding this execution.

It's interesting that the author sets up such beautiful imagery in the beginning of this paragraph. When first reading "the water, touched to gold by the early sun...stream" I didn't take into account that it was actually serving as an irritation to the man. Bierce has an odd capability of interjecting these beautiful scenes to counteract that which is in actuality something so incredibly dreadful. I wonder what he hoped to accomplish by using this technique?

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Posted October 8, 2007  12:30 pm
Part 1: "A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama...", paragraph 5, replying to Rebecca Holmes

I think that “trust” is just an archaic word for “thrust”, and not a play on words by the part of Bierce. I haven’t been able to find any definition of “trust” that has anything to do with knives or combat. If it were a play on words, it would seem far too ostentatious to match the style of the rest of the story.

The phrase "trust of a knife" is confusing... I can't find any references to what "trust" means in terms of knives. I assume it refers to the blade?

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Posted October 8, 2007  12:19 pm
Part 1: "A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama...", paragraph 2

The lieutenant on the shore is a junior officer who would rank somewhere between the sergeant and the captain on the bridge. The most senior person at the scene is definitely the army captain.

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Posted October 8, 2007  12:03 pm
Part 1: "A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama...", paragraph 2, replying to Daniel Thaller

Except perhaps with respect to The Matrix, I don’t think the word “sentinel” has very much to do with machinery or mindlessness. It generally refers to something or somebody that observes or keeps watch. Beside, why would Bierce use vocabulary to bring attention to the mindlessness of the sentry while all the soldiers present were really only following the commandant’s orders?

Maybe it's the Matrix that's making me think of this, but when I read the word "sentinel" I thought of those soldiers being nothing more than machines of their government. They certainly don't want to be the ones to execute this random guy, but they have no choice.

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Posted October 8, 2007  12:00 pm
Part 1: "A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama...", paragraph 2

Christina, in fact, the word sinister comes from a Latin word sinistra, meaning “left”.

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Posted October 8, 2007  11:55 am
Part 1: "A man stood upon a railroad bridge in northern Alabama...", paragraph 3

“He wore a moustache and pointed beard, but no whiskers.” In this case, does “no whiskers” mean that he doesn’t have a 5 o’clock shadow? I’ve always thought whiskers would be a moustache. I guess it means he’s well-shaven, since the section seems to be showing that he is well-dressed, etc.

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Posted October 8, 2007  11:51 am